I'm proud to introduce a talented brother originating from dirty jeerz, I have had the pleasure of working with him, I will randomly post his tracks. Prepare for the release of the Wryteous Movement Mix CD. Enjoy, critique, leave feedback, we want feedback to provide a classic mix CD and album.
http://www.myspace.com/wryteous1
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6 comments:
I like the word play is slick, its a bangin original track so there is little room for error
Toot, told me about the new post, when is the mixtape dropping when can we get a release date papi
He is missing your tracks. Hint Hint
I see where he is going but Im not really feeling it...
Maybe a different beat would help?
His voice doesn't sound hungry like he's enjoying the track (he's not hungry in these streets)... seems like he's reading the verses, which is cool but sometimes you gotta fake it til u make it...
The animal concept/wordplay is cool keep that, just need to potentially re-record for re-release with a new beat and a dif presentation style to show that he's really feelin his own track.
I def see potential but he's gonna need a lil' coaching... if you catch my drift!
I loved it because the original was tight, but I cosign Infinity its like he is reading but then again that may just be his flow there is nothing wrong with that. Just make sure the word play and beats are on point to keep the listeners interested. Prime examples dont be like Guru, Jeru or U-God feel me
I'm sure where I stand with this track,maybe its the beat. But who am I to judge, at the end of the day you only have to answer for yourself, if you like it then thats all that matters.
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